Poramai..from previsous post
என் இதயம் பொறாமையினால் இரத்தம் கக்குகிறது
தற்சமையம் நீ என் கண்களுக்குள் இருக்கிறாய் என்று!!
Thanglish
yen idhayam poramaiyinal ratham kakkukeerathu
tharsamaiyam nee yen kangalukkul irrukeerai yeandru
Translation..tried
my heart is spewing blood in jealousy
'cos you're in my eyes, at present !!!


19 Comments:
eppo bypass surgery?
brilliant, once again ur poems seem to flow,
அட இத இப்படி கூட பார்க்கலாமோ??
கண்களால் ஒரு வகை!
இதயத்தால் ஒரு வகை!
ஆக மொத்தம்
காதல் ஒரு வகையான பார்வை தான்
அடா அடா.. இனிமை இனிமை!
(Tanglish:
ada, itha ippadi kooda paarkalaamo??
kangalaal oru vakai!
ithayathaal oru vakai!
aaga motham
kaathal oru vakaiyaana paarvai thaan!
adaa adaa.. inimai inimai)
English:
Oh, can we view this in this way too??
One way thru eyes!
One way thru heart!
In all,
Love is indeed a different way!
wow superb!)
Ungal idhayam mattum thaan poramayil ratham kakuitha???not ur other parts like brain etc..etc..
neways i LOVED this one...coolcoolcool
ioiio..umm..paen ennai bypass pannathaala..ennakku ippo bypass!!
Srivatsan..thanks for the comment
Magnus..ஆமாம் காதல் கொண்டவருக்கு...ஒரு வகையான பார்வை தான்..நன்றி...but ur comments are awesome!!
Grey..brain cells irrundhathaanae...thanks for the comment!!!
Kanngale kanngale kaadhal seivadhai vittu vidungal
Penngale penngale vaalibharai konjam vaazha vidungal
:-)
good one!
enna ore love in the air epovum?
konjam velakkamaaa solla mudiyumaa..
ooh such romantic words. do you write these?
virumandi...u seem to have a great gift for poetry...while love poetry is good...dont waste ur talents by limiting urself 2 just one type of poems...seriously consider other types of poetry too...that's my sincere advice to u :)
Hmm...writing a story, partly inspired by your two-liners :), mine does not have two liners, but you might catch a few familiar lines!
appidi ippidi solli,
kangalukkum, idhayathukkum sandai mudinthu viteergalae.
Um..pramadham.!
prabhu..enna pannaradhu..endha kadhal yarai vidaradhu.
ioiio..velakkkam ellam neram varumpodhu sollaraen..
Siddarth..yeah.i can understand but what to..somehow these come easy for me..so at present...i am kind of cofining myself..but thinking of digressing in future
Lorena..yep..i write these..people call me hopeless romantic!!!
RS..umm..looking forward to it!!!
Narayanan sir..kannukkum-idhyathukkum sandai..andhu keezanchudhu ennoda mandai!!!!
elamai,enimai ,arumai perumai thangal kavithai
virumandi.....
nee nallavana kaetavana ?
a...thanks for coming by..and thanks for the comment
freeyavedu..yenkuda ivvalavu naal pazhakittu..naan yaarunnnu theriyalaiya!!!1
nice one :-)
Absolute brilliance... Esp when the reader weaves in the previous posts!
Viru
poraamai kavidhaigal irandume arumai...
keep going man...
ATB for your qualifiers...
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